Travel of Guangzhou, HongKong
Introduction
Date: July 22 - July 26, 2025 Location: Guangzhou, ShenZhen, HongKong. Transport: Train
Actually, the main destination of this trip is HongKong, but it didn't deserve to pay for a single travel for HK, so I decide to swing by GZ and SZ. This is my first time traveling abroad since I born, The world is vast,and I'm ready to see it.
Day1 Guangzhou
GUANGZHOU, famous of its cuisine, surely, its beautiful sight as well. We arrived at 11:00, After dropping our luggage, we set out for lunch. It's important thing that eating variety of food. First, we decided to eat BaoZai Rice, whose full name '两味煲仔饭'. It's located in Liwan District, right across from the LongJIng building. When I found out the resturant was in a invisible street corner and had a timeworn atomsphere, I knew immediately: this was exactly the spot I'd been looking for . Indeed, the rice was the most delicious I had eaten ever.
Then we walked down to XiHua road, Because of hot weather, we selected a sugar-water shop to cool off. It's a bit of shame, but the taste was ordinary.
Next, stick to the plan, we tried the GAYA Café. Believed me, I wouldn't to recommend it to you.
At 2:00, we a headed to next stop, Sacred Heart Cathedral.
According to our itinerary, we would arrive at GZ New Television Tower before sunset. GZ tower is a landmark building in GuanZhou. Surrounded by many high-rises. The tower AKA 'little waist' , can display a variety of colors at night.
In the end, we made our way from Shangxiajiu Commercial Pedestrian Street to YongQingFang and eventualy we ate the most classic food called 'ChangFen' in a brand resturant near by our hotel. I have to say, it is much more flavorful than I've had in my hometown.
Day2 Guangzhou - ShenZhen
The second day was very relaxing , we could sleep till 10:00, then would have a breakfast at XiHua road, it’s not wrong, back to the street again. First we'd have a toast, I can tell you it would have a long line if the day were a holiday. Then we would have a rice noodle which mixed steak, heart and other ingredients. The snake bar is called ''ZhenZhen". I highly recommend this restaurant, the soup of noodles is truly delicious.
After that, we went to a cartoon-themed mall, it's at ZhongShanWu Rd. You can see many popular IPs there, and what's even cooler is seeing many beautiful and cute cosplayers, if you are a anime fan, I'm sure you will love the place.
On our last a period time in GuangZhou, we chose a massive restaurant called 'TangRenXuan' for some native cuisine. By searching in network, we discovered they offer a 50% discount between 14:00 - 16:00 on weekdays. So we made a point of a going precisely during that time slot. It's so glad to enjoy the food at half price .
After filling our stomachs, we just headed to ShenZhen by train. Without incident, we continued to quest for dinner, this time , we dug up a fantastic spot tucked away in an alley where some low-income workers live , the same as former place , the food was not only cheap but also delicious.
Day3 HongKong Citywalk
HongKong is the main destination of this trip. To be honest, I wasn't in charge of planning the HK portion , but I should still record the route and how things went.
Getting up early always is difficult. We set off about 10:00 AM. After clearing customs, we decided to head downtown by bus this time, thinking we could enjoy the scenery along the way. However, When I went to bus, it hit a snag: My QRcode of Alipay couldn't be scanned by the system. This cause me and my partner to get separated. We got off in Yuen Long District to transfer.
Starting citywalk, Sham Shui Po - prince Edward - MONG KOK
we had some snacks here.
Continuing Citywalk, K11 Mart - Victoria Harbour - Avenue of Stars HK - Tsim Sha Tsui - Chungking Mansion - Yau Ma Tei Station
K11 Mart - Victoria Harbour - Avenue of Stars HK
研香冰室:龙眼冰
妈咪鸡蛋仔
辉记车仔面
**Believe me! ** the noolde is awesome.
In short, first day we traveled northern side of Victoria Harbour. Considering luggage convince, our plan was going to take a bus in Jordan back to ShenZheng. what an exhausting day it was! But so enjoyable.
Day4 HongKong Citywalk 2
This day we would traveled southern side of Victoria Harbour.
Causeway Bay
快乐顺景茶餐厅
hashtag B
Kenndy Town
城记冰室
Quarry Bay
Central
Victoria Peak
Just as we were ready to head to Victoria Peak, the weather suddenly turned: pouring rain, loud thunder, and strong winds. It looked like our plans might be ruined. By 8:00 PM, the rain had finally eased up a bit. I insisted we go. We made it to the peak, unfortunately, the rain started coming down hard again. but we had still seen the night scenery.
Lan Kwai Fong
Central Star Ferry Pier
Finally we caught the ferry back to Victoria Harbour. Our time in Hong Kong was winding down. Obviously having a good rest was priority.
Day5 ShenZhen
The day we walked around the Huaqiangbei Neighborhood. It seemed nothing to write.
A Glimpse of Hong Kong: A Travel Summary
Looking back on this trip, I truly enjoyed myself. Even though it was exhausting, every bit of it was worth experiencing again.






这篇文章详细记录了作者在广州、深圳和香港的旅行经历,给人一种身临其境的感觉。以下是我对此文的一些评论和建议:
优点
实用性强:文章提供了具体的旅行路线和餐厅推荐,读者可以根据这些信息规划自己的行程。
个人感受丰富:作者分享了自己的第一手体验,包括对食物的评价和对景点的描述,这让文章更具吸引力。
清晰的结构:文章按照天数分段,逻辑清晰,读者易于跟随。
本地特色突出:作者提到广州的美食和香港的城市游览,成功展现了这两个地方的独特魅力。
缺点
语法和拼写错误:文章中存在一些语法错误和拼写错误,比如“resturant”应该是“restaurant”,“heart”应为“meat”。这样的错误可能影响阅读体验。
句子结构单一:部分句子结构较为简单,缺乏变化。可以考虑使用复合句或更复杂的句式来提升文章的流畅性。
细节不足:虽然提到了许多餐厅和景点,但某些部分的描述显得较为简略,缺乏更多的背景信息,比如餐厅的招牌菜或是某些景点的历史。
情感表达略显平淡:尽管作者提及了自己旅行的愉悦,但整体情感表达很平淡,可以加一些更生动的描述来传达旅行的兴奋和乐趣。
建议
校对和编辑:在发布前,可以进行一次仔细的校对,修正语法和拼写错误。
丰富细节:可以加入更多对当地文化、风俗的观察,以及与当地人互动的经历,增加文章的深度。
使用比喻和形象化语言:为了让文字更生动,可以尝试使用比喻和形象化的语言,让读者更容易感受到当时的场景和情感。
总的来说,这篇旅行文章在结构上合理、内容上实用,但在语言表达和细节上还有提升的空间。希望看到更多作者的旅行故事!